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2001 Short Story Contest Special Edition

Volume 6, Number 1, Spring 2002

   

We Are Thinking of You

by Patty Enrado

First Prize - $1000

An elderly Filipina woman tries to justify the actions of her husband over the years, only to discover the hypocrisy of the man's words and actions. 

       They say he is going to send me back to the Philippines.

       I have become useless to my husband after forty years of marriage and thirty years of work packing oranges. Since I suffered my stroke months ago, I’ve become just a voice to Bonafe, one that scolds him; I tell him he must either spend more time with me, or risk having me forget what he looks like-the black freckles on his chocolate-colored skin, the sea green of his eyes like the color of the salty ocean off San Esteban-or not recognize the way he rolls his R’s when he calls my name, Cora. I laugh, so he knows I’m only joking. I’ve stopped asking him about his fever; Bonafe likes to gamble a little, but it isn’t a sickness, as everyone in Terra Bella would like to think. I’ve never minded him betting on horses, playing rummy on weekends, or going on overnight trips to Las Vegas with our townmates. These three make up his world of gambling. "It’s my hobby," he explained to me, when we first got married, and I have always come to see it as his pastime, just as my flower garden and my crochet work had once been hobbies of mine before my fingers lost their movement, their touch.

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Nor Dark of Night

by Paul Michel

Second Prize - $200

The journey of a missionary priest into a remote jungle village, and of two
women who follow him there. 

      Angela Donahue hated the month of August. It wasn’t just that the late summer Pennsylvania heat made her head feel like a sponge in a tub. August also meant the imminent end of summer vacation, and thus a return to a third-grade classroom in a fourth-rate elementary school that seemed more certain each year to be the graveyard of her once promising career as an educational reformer. Worst of all, August marked bad anniversaries: the deaths of her father (four years ago), and her mother (the following summer), and the birthday of her lost brother Gabriel, who left Pennsylvania for a country no one had ever heard of, and who hadn’t been heard of for nearly six long years.

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Luis the Brush-Walker

by Paul Perry

Third Prize - $100

The struggle of a man to cross the border from Mexico to the United States in the hopes of finding a better life, only to discover the value of what he had left behind.

        Luis Miguel Acosta crossed the Rio Grande sixteen times before he finally made it all the way to San Antonio where, he had been told, a hard-working man, willing to work ten hours a day, six days a week, using a shovel or a wheelbarrow, could make as much as five hundred dollars a week, two thousand dollars a month, more money than Luis had made in all of his nineteen years combined, working in the fields near his village..

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How Died My City, How Died My Soul

by Gary Hill

Honorable Mention - $50

A man recounts his trials and failings as a boxer and father, and how it parallels the race riots of East St. Louis in the early part of the 20th century .

       I grew up in East Saint Louis, Illinois, and I'm proud of it. I know. I know East Saint Louis is an all-black ghetto with major crimes every day, over a thousand derelict structures, murders, abandoned cars, trash in five hundred vacant lots, shootings, stabbings, perfidious racial prejudice, robberies, home of the bloodiest race riot in USA history, a place where deadly hate and prejudice pierced too deep. I know the incompetent, gluttonous politicians have robbed the city openly, and with no excuses, for 200 years, and that the mayors, today and for the past fifty years, have presided over a long, dragged-out funeral. I know the downtown area looks like a deserted battlefield, like Beirut after Civil War, with the shops boarded up, with derelict buildings crumbling, falling down, storm and sewage drains rotted, water lines old, dangerous and not repaired, shells of gutted structures, empty hulks, burned out buildings, 75% unemployment, broken glass, with garbage in the streets because of un-enforced sanitation codes, and iron bars on the few surviving businesses and homes, churches with chain link fences around their parking lots. I know there’s chromium, arsenic, mercury, selenium, in the soil, periodic flooding.

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The Lighthouse Keeper

by Neale McDevitt

Honorable Mention - $50

After finally getting the girl of his dreams, a man realizes that it's only temporary, and that he's just part of her travels and adventures.


      The night before she left forever, her smarmy friends staged a dinner party and dubbed it the Last Supper. They had seen Grace come and go a dozen times before and they were annoyingly adept at the grand gesture. Some guy I didn’t know hoisted his glass and toasted her sense of adventure. "I’m not sure how you two hooked up," he smirked over his black-framed hipster glasses, "Grace is a child of the world, McVie, and you’ve hardly stepped outside that little neighborhood of yours."

       Everyone laughed, except me. I took a mouthful of Italian red and let it sit until it bit at my gums. "I’m the fucking lighthouse, dickhead," I finally said long after people had started talking about other things. "I don’t move and I don’t change. The light on the rock." The whole pinch-faced crew stared at me like I was a frozen caveman all thawed out and stinking up their smoked salmon send-off. Everyone except her. Her small hand squeezed my knee under the table.

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Electric Light of the World

by Doug Crandell

Honorable Mention - $50

A man confronts his past by reconciling with his father and reconnecting with a former lover.


      I am from the first electrically lighted city in the world - the same town as Crystal Gayle. Once, for Halloween, I dressed up as her, long brown hair tickling the ground, but my father ripped me out of the get-up and made me go as ‘a injun who’d just seen the lights.’ He had my mother use iodine on my legs, arm and skinny chest and told her to make sure I went like the boy I was; like what he and others were taught the Indians’ skin must’ve looked like when our town was so strangely illuminated more than a century ago. The Fort Wayne Gazette called it "the strangest light ever exhibited in the United States." But even now, I still dream of Crystal’s hair; it’s all that length.

       As I stood near the cenotaph that marked the electricity memorial, I was having a hard time remembering why I’d decided to drive the two hours from Indianapolis to come back home. Luminarias bought and arranged by the Future Homemakers of America lined the pea gravel path that circled the huge limestone rock. If I had forgotten any of the town’s history, it was all there for me on the bronze foot plaques, and hand painted signs that surrounded the monument.

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Camp Dad

by M.E. Mischcon

Honorable Mention - $50

A teenage girl coming of age faces her insecurity and personal doubt by trying to understand what drove her father and mother apart.


       The day dad left was not really the day he left. No way. He was gone long before that. Being the kid, hard to say exactly when he started to dematerialize but I do recall when he actually walked out. December 7, 1995. That was a day of infamy, all right.

       Come to think of it, that day at our house did resemble Pearl Harbor...minus the palm trees. Around here, December, even early on, is all about ice and snow. But like the day Pearl Harbor was bombed (or, for me, the day Kurt Cobain offed himself) people tend to remember where they were when bad news hit. My grand dad, Papa, told me he was driving to the butcher when he heard about the attack on Pearl Harbor. Said he was listening to a Benny Goodman riff when the announcement came through. Stopped his car in the middle of Main Street and was rear ended by someone who was also shocked by the news. Me? I was in Janie Breslins finished basement when her little brother, Josh, ran down the steps chanting: "Kurt Cobain shot hisself in the head! Kurt Cobain shot hisself in the head, Kurt Cobain shot hisself in the head!"

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